"The Nowhere and Everywhere Story"
(taken from http://cathyday.com/2013/09/teaching-tuesday-setting/)
Many apprentice writers write what I call the “Nowhere and Everywhere Story.” Their stories occur in a temporal and cultural vacuum. The setting could just as easily be a small town in Pennsylvania as a small town in Florida, a suburb of Los Angeles as a suburb of New York City, a farm in Oregon as a farm in Ohio.
Most of the time, it’s because they assume that the setting in their head
Many apprentice writers write what I call the “Nowhere and Everywhere Story.” Their stories occur in a temporal and cultural vacuum. The setting could just as easily be a small town in Pennsylvania as a small town in Florida, a suburb of Los Angeles as a suburb of New York City, a farm in Oregon as a farm in Ohio.
Most of the time, it’s because they assume that the setting in their head
- is on the page already
- that (since oftentimes the students in workshop are from the same state) its understood that the story is set in the kind of place they are from
- (gulp!) they claim they omitted setting on purpose, since one place is just like any other place.
HERE IS NOT THERE, OR SETTING AS CHARACTER by J.T. DUTTON
20 interesting questions to ask yourself as you create the setting of your novel
- How big or small is the place you want to write about? What is the size of the population?
- Where is it located in relation to other landmarks, regions, or worlds?
- What is the landscape like? Is it mountainous or flat? A prairie or desert? What grows there?
- What is the average temperature? Do the seasons change? Does temperature or weather affect how people live and dress? Or how much time they spend outside?
- How do people earn a living? Who is the largest employer? How much time to people spend working each day?
- What is the average income? Are people in his place unusually poor, or unusually well off?
- Who has the power to create change? How is this place governed?
- What are the conflicts between neighbor and neighbor? Is there stratification? Envy or hatred between groups?
- Who is happiest about having to live/be in this place? Who is least happy?
- If the place held an annual celebration, what would it honor? What makes the people of the town most proud? Who marches in their parade?
- How “modern” is it in comparison to the world around it? Is it behind the times? Or does it have its finger on the pulse of fads and fashions? Do the people here look up or down at any other place?
- How clean or safe is it? Do people feel comfortable about leaving their doors unlocked, or does it have an eeriness or grittiness?
- Who is happiest about living or being in this place? who is least happy?
- How moral is it? Do bad people suffer and good people triumph? Or are endings determined by abstract and complicated forces?
- What religion do most people who live here practice? Are residents bound by a certain kind of spirituality?
- What is this place’s biggest flaw in the eyes of a stranger? What is its biggest asset in the eyes of a stranger?
- What is the mood of this place? Is it spooky? Bright? Honest and comfortable? Sad?
- What is the biggest threat to peace and prosperity?
- How vulnerable is this place to change? How sheltered or unsheltered is it?
- Who best represents the town’s image?